Bac Kim Thang

This is so beautiful! the fonts and use of imagery and text is so nice. I like that you changed the text to the same font and color so you have to use your cursor to find the next passage path. A suggestion would be to write a disclaimer in the beginning to use your cursor to find the path! cause I almost missed the next stage because I thought it wasn't clickable haha. 

The pictures that you used scared me. I think it really helps with the experience of the game. It’s great to learn about the Vietnamese Folklore.

I believe in the underwater creatures now, no more beach days for the year.

This is super poetic. I really like the shifting fonts! there are certain passages where all of the font looks the same, so it takes that extra bit of searching to find the next link, which could be challenging in some other games maybe but I think it works really well with the tone of this piece. 

At the ending where the Oil Seller passes away, it could be interesting if going back to the beginning presented a different version where there's only one character / only the option to be the frog seller.

This is also a wonderful example of cultural preservation through digital art :-) great work!

It is so funny, and I have a great time to test the all the results. I loves the backgorund and fonts in the games. They help me have a more impressive experience.

I am interested in the font that you chose to use. The one with lots of noise looks like it was written a long time ago. I like there is one good ending for it. I didn't know there was a two job at first but when I turned the game back again, my job changed so it was fun to be in a kind of different situation. 

I really like the pictures you chose to use. The pictures and the story match so well!  Also, the overall mood of the game was really spooky, so I loved it.